Alexis + Her Starry Friends

This is really great! Your background is FLAWLESS and I am in love with it. It's cute and you blended the colours pretty well for what you have. My suggestion is to pitch those crayolas asap! You have a lot of talent and I fel that they are holding you back. Printer paper is good too, but not made to last. The shading on the clothing is suberb. The skin colour looks a little dull to me, like it could use more ooph. Get a darker shade for the shadows and blend, blend blend! The colour for the skin could be richer too. Your anatomy is a little off, her shoulders are too square. Round them off a bit. She looks really good proportionally, though I think her legs are a little thick. Her thighs are a little shortish, and the curve in her leg past her knee could use a little work. Your calf is thinner than your thigh in real life. Hands could use some work, but lets be honest here. Hands are killers and soooooo hard to draw. I think you did pretty well on them. She needs a wrist, and the arm with the balloon could use a little work.

Over all this is a good piece and I really like it. I hope my tips can help you, and don't come off mean or anything. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> Sometimes I sound a little mean in critique if I don't mean to.